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Humiliation Game Redesign Plan
Overview
Redesigning the psychological journey scenario to focus more on interactive gooning tasks rather than branching story choices, with a beautiful female domme as the figure.
Current State Analysis
- Current duration: ~40+ steps, but mostly choices (instant)
- Current balance: Too many text/choice steps, not enough physical actions
- Current paths: Multiple paths to defiant ending (~40% chance)
- Current tone: Heavy psychological self-degradation focus
- Current figure: Clinical/lab coat authority figure (gender neutral)
Target Changes
1. Duration & Pacing
- Target time: 15 minutes total
- Choice card reading time: 30 seconds each
- Calculation:
- 15 min = 900 seconds
- Let's say 5-6 choice cards × 30s = 150-180s for reading
- Remaining: ~720-750s for timed actions
- Timed actions should be: 4-5 mirror tasks (180s each) + 3-4 position verifications (60s each) + 2-3 action tasks (120-240s each)
2. Step Type Distribution (New)
- Choice steps: 5-6 total (down from 25+)
- Mirror tasks: 4-5 (up from 3)
- Position verification: 3-4 (up from 2)
- Action tasks: 3-4 (up from 5)
- Total interactive steps: ~15-17 steps
- Total estimated time: ~14-16 minutes
3. Path Structure Changes
Current Paths (Too Many)
- Submission → Broken ✓
- Questioning → Acceptance → Broken ✓
- Questioning → Ethics → Defiant ✗
- Defiance → Strong → Autonomy → Defiant ✗
- Defiance → Strong → Moral → Defiant ✗
- Defiance → Strong → Pure → Defiant ✗
- Defiance → Weak → Trap Recognized → Defiant ✗
- Negotiation → Safety → Control Maintained → Defiant ✗
- Negotiation → Reversal → Defiant ✗
- Plus many more defiant paths...
New Path Structure (Simplified)
Main Linear Path (95% of users):
- Entrance (Choice: Accept or Question)
- Initial Submission Task (Mirror: Self-objectification)
- Compliance Check (Position: Kneeling)
- Deepening (Action: Edging while repeating mantras)
- Objectification (Mirror: Watch yourself as an object)
- Endurance Test (Position: Hold degrading pose)
- Breaking Point (Action: Intense edging session)
- Acceptance (Mirror: Accept your role)
- Final Submission (Position: Ultimate submission pose)
- Broken Ending ✓
Hidden Defiant Path (~1% - requires specific choices):
- Only accessible by making the "wrong" choice at Step 1 (Question)
- Then making another specific choice at one critical junction
- If user shows strong resistance twice, they escape
- Otherwise, they merge back to main path
4. Tone & Content Changes
Remove/Reduce:
- ❌ Self-degradation focus ("I am worthless", "I am a failure")
- ❌ Clinical/analytical psychological breaking
- ❌ Heavy intellectual/philosophical debates
- ❌ Multiple complex branching narratives
Add/Increase:
- ✅ Physical humiliation (positions, poses, exposure)
- ✅ Edging and gooning focus (stroking patterns, edge denial)
- ✅ Objectification (being watched, displayed, used)
- ✅ Submission to female authority (the Domme)
- ✅ Sensory focus (how it feels, what you see in mirror)
- ✅ Progressive arousal building
- ✅ Gooner mantras (focus on porn, obedience, arousal)
Female Domme Character:
- Appearance: Beautiful, commanding, elegant but cruel
- Attitude: Confident, teasing, knows she has power over you
- Style: Uses your arousal against you, controls through pleasure
- Voice: Seductive but firm, mocking but alluring
- Goal: Turn you into an obedient gooning toy
5. New Scenario Flow
Act 1: Submission Initiation (3-4 min)
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CHOICE: "The Domme's Invitation"
- Story: Beautiful woman invites you to a private session. She knows what you crave.
- Option A: "Accept eagerly" → Main path
- Option B: "Ask what this is about" → Resistance check
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MIRROR TASK: "Look at Your Desperation" (180s)
- She positions you in front of a mirror, stroking
- Task: Edge while watching yourself, admit how desperate you are
- Mantras: "I need this", "I'm so desperate", "I can't resist her"
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POSITION VERIFICATION: "Kneel for Her" (60s)
- She commands you to kneel, hands behind back
- Task: Hold position while she circles you
- Instruction: "Good toy. Stay just like that."
Act 2: Deepening Control (5-6 min)
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ACTION TASK: "Edge on Her Command" (240s)
- She sits back and watches you stroke
- Task: Edge repeatedly on her count, slower and slower
- Pattern: "Stroke. Slower. Stop. Edge. Don't cum. Good toy."
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MIRROR TASK: "Watch Yourself Obey" (180s)
- Mirror positioned to show you stroking
- Task: Watch yourself edge while she narrates
- Mantras: "I obey", "I'm her toy", "Stroking feels so good"
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CHOICE: "How Far Will You Go?"
- She offers two options
- Option A: "Deeper submission" → Continue main path
- Option B: "This is too much" → Last chance for defiant path (requires another resistance later)
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POSITION VERIFICATION: "Display Position" (90s)
- She orders you into a humiliating display pose
- Task: Legs spread, exposed, vulnerable
- Instruction: "Let me see what a desperate gooner looks like"
Act 3: Breaking Point (4-5 min)
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ACTION TASK: "Goon for Her" (300s)
- She starts playing with you mentally
- Task: Rapid edging, can't stop, can't think
- Mantras: "I'm a gooner", "Porn is my purpose", "I serve her"
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MIRROR TASK: "See What You've Become" (180s)
- Final mirror session
- Task: Watch yourself completely lost in gooning
- Mantras: "This is what I am", "I'm broken", "I accept this"
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POSITION VERIFICATION: "Final Submission" (90s)
- Ultimate submission pose (forehead to ground, ass up, still stroking)
- Task: Complete surrender position
- Instruction: "Stay broken. Stay mine."
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BROKEN ENDING
- She stands over you
- "You're mine now. A perfect gooning toy. Broken, obedient, desperate."
- Outcome: "broken"
Alternate Path: Defiant Ending (1% chance)
- Only if user chose "Question" at step 1 AND "Too much" at step 6
- Leads to one more check:
CHOICE: "Final Decision"
- She gets frustrated: "You keep resisting. Why?"
- Option A: "I know myself too well to break" → DEFIANT ENDING
- Option B: "Maybe I should just give in" → Back to main path (step 8)
DEFIANT ENDING (if reached):
- She steps back, smirks
- "You're stronger than most. You know who you are. I can't break that."
- Outcome: "defiant"
6. Example Content Updates
Old Style (Too Clinical):
Story: "The figure tilts their head, studying you. 'Questioning is natural...'"
Action: "Suppress your protective instincts and continue deeper into conditioning"
New Style (Gooning Focused):
Story: "She leans forward, her eyes locked on yours. 'I can see how hard you are. How desperate. You want to goon for me, don't you?'"
Action: "Kneel and stroke, slowly, while staring up at her - edge three times while repeating 'I want to goon for you, Miss'"
7. Implementation Checklist
Step 1: Create New Scenario Structure
- Define 10 main path steps (entrance → broken)
- Define 2-3 resistance path steps (hidden defiant)
- Ensure total time = ~15 minutes
- Verify step distribution (5-6 choice, 4-5 mirror, 3-4 verification, 3-4 action)
Step 2: Write New Content
- Rewrite all stories with female Domme voice
- Focus on humiliation, edging, gooning themes
- Remove self-degradation, add objectification
- Add specific physical instructions to all tasks
- Create gooner-focused mantras for each task
Step 3: Set Durations
- Mirror tasks: 180s each
- Position verification: 60-90s each
- Action tasks: 120-300s each
- Calculate total to hit 14-16 minute target
Step 4: Test Path Logic
- Verify main path flows smoothly
- Verify defiant path requires 2 specific choices
- Ensure all paths lead to an ending
- Check that ~99% of users hit broken ending
Questions for Review
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Duration: Is 15 minutes the right target? Or should it be longer/shorter?
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Step count: ~15-17 interactive steps feel right? Or need more/less?
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Defiant path: Is 1% too rare? Should it be 5%? Or remove entirely?
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Tone: Is the shift from "clinical degradation" to "sensual domination" the right direction?
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Balance: Current plan is:
- ~30% mirror tasks (watching yourself)
- ~25% position verification (holding poses)
- ~25% action tasks (edging/stroking)
- ~20% choices (story decisions)
- Does this feel right?
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Domme character: Any specific personality traits or dialogue style you want emphasized?
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Content themes: Priority order correct?
- Gooning/edging
- Humiliation/objectification
- Submission to Domme
- Physical positions/exposure
Please review and provide feedback before I implement!